Eros & Thanatos want me to mention
We're up to 173K as of today
They remind me of lovers in Paris
Lovers in books & movies
They stand for so much
They always keep track
Their fights are spectacular
They accumulate
I know other people not myself
Do they also belong to the club
The continuous & the discrete
Love you love you knot
N-dimensional geometries
And those circles moved
As it writes me an object swims
To the glass & says Hello
I'm Thanatos (or Eros)
A hand takes rapidly dictation
An eye the weave in a rug
This is the twentieth line
When I exited, it was down to 87K. I'm sure this has a simple explanation. But at first I feared I'd lost half the book.
My impression is, this down-to-earth person writing these notes underwrites the authenticity of the poems, which are hard to evaluate for those who lack practice.
You must also understand that magic